hey guys, what do you think about this one ?? " Eternal Passions " by jerry hamilton...

F

forestgrovejerry

New member
...aka poet man =)? I held her in my arms last night ...
I held her close, I held her tight ...

I could taste her sweet passion, upon her soft tender lips ...
as she pulled me even closer, and then held my hips ...

as I stared even deeper into her soft loving eyes ...
her kisses they taunted, they teased & they pleased ...

in a matter of moments, I was so weak in my knees ...
as she shoved her tongue even deeper in my mouth just to please ...

my brow started sweating, my heart beating fast ...
my head it was spinning, oh God let this last ...

she shot me her pout as she moaned & she groaned ...
I whispered I love you don't ever go home ...

she said that she loved me, she said I was sweet ...
with this beautiful Angel beside me, my soul's now complete ....
 
WoW....that is all I can say to all ur writings/poems!
They are soo very beautiful, and emotional, and so
well described, you should write a book! Awesome
and very gifted. Thanks for sharing~Keep writing!
 
Back
Top