I wrote it for my band can you help me finish it? and is it good so far?
Breath in the darkness take out the light.
Listen to my words explosive like dniomite.
Hatered and hurtful words.Endless days
dreadful nights. Life without you would not
be the same.A voice to die for, life to live for,
not in my life would change.Smile,laugh or cry
you where there.Live for the days pray for the nights.
In our hearts,on minds,in our soul in our body to be
there when we need you when we want you
your always there when your gone its not the same
a body heart mind soul left in the dark and with no
one around to help im left here with out you
Breath in the darkness take out the light.
Listen to my words explosive like dniomite.
Hatered and hurtful words.Endless days
dreadful nights. Life without you would not
be the same.A voice to die for, life to live for,
not in my life would change.Smile,laugh or cry
you where there.Live for the days pray for the nights.
In our hearts,on minds,in our soul in our body to be
there when we need you when we want you
your always there when your gone its not the same
a body heart mind soul left in the dark and with no
one around to help im left here with out you