Hey can you read my poem and tell me what you think...If you dont mind?

........help...

New member
I am vibrant of colors
watint to be painted
Head open with thoughts
waiting for them to over flow
Cant realize how much love really cost

The words I love you may have been told
but just saying it and not meaning it
can break me whole

Wonders and thoughts
can make me crumble
but down inside my heart fumbles

like a broken glass
i try to reach you
but i fall.there's no hope
now no hope at all.

Drowning in pain
not at all founding with love
love hurts you say.......
but i don't think so at all.
 
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