its for one of those -I AM- poems
anyways supposedly the first sentence is too weak for an opening..do you guys have any suggestions on how to make it better...
I am a shy girl who speaks only when the time is right.
I wonder what makes a novel truly great.
I hear the incessant voice of my conscience whisper at my ear.
I see the single blade of grass that remains still in the summer breeze.
I want to travel back in time to relive that special night.
I am a shy girl who speaks only when the time is right.
anyways supposedly the first sentence is too weak for an opening..do you guys have any suggestions on how to make it better...
I am a shy girl who speaks only when the time is right.
I wonder what makes a novel truly great.
I hear the incessant voice of my conscience whisper at my ear.
I see the single blade of grass that remains still in the summer breeze.
I want to travel back in time to relive that special night.
I am a shy girl who speaks only when the time is right.