here look what I can do =P, is it poetry yet?

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to make a dance hurt
a flurry of flung verbage
perspiration will drench
in quick rains of words edge
clamor I do after the prize
to find that cliched jewel
that can open up shut eyes
so critic if you like
or spare me your mentoring
I am but a channel
for the generation of poets ignoring
now that is something I needed to hear bk
thank you
=]
 
it's okay.... just remember write a poem as if you were writing a song or a story and poems do and dont rhyme depending on what you're writing about. when you write the first couple lines the rest should flow out of you. when that happens you are just 'on a roll'. forget about focusing and stressing yourself on one topic but write whats on your mind. like i said the rest will flow. dont worry every poet starts somewhere. i've been there too. so you can never say you arent ready to be a poet it's just whether or not you found what you have to write about to make it flow which makes you a good poet. hope this helps!!! GoodLuck!!!!
 
mentor I'll listen
dance is my obsession
don't think you can give advice
on the beat I dance it right
at least with my feet
not always with poetry.
(lolz)
 
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