Jaida Caroll
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I had this novel idea, but I can't figure out what I want the plot line to be, and its bothering me :\
The point of view of this story is 1st person (**the boy**)
Anyways here's the gist of the idea:
There's a 15 year old guy, and he doesn't know who his father is. (What he also doesn't know is that he is a demi-angel. His mom had had him with an angel. This is against the *angel rules* and so there was a curse put on him. This curse is that he can only see death and evil and rot, never beauty.) So this boy, who can only see everything as evil with no beauty, finds this one girl.
This one girl, is pretty much the opposite of this boy. Her father had her with a demon, making this girl a demi-demon. Now this girl also does not know who her mother is, and why she sees everything so beautiful. (As it is against the demon rules to have a kid with a human, she has a curse put on her.) Being half demon, this girl doesn't like beauty.
The reason the boy can see the girl normally is because she has no inner beauty.
This is the idea^ but I have no plot line. I don't know what should happen with theses two characters. I don't know whether to make the girl the antagonist, or just the protagonist's (the boy) friend/lover. I was thinking maybe they use each other to find out about their parents? Could you help me think of a plot idea for what should happen to theses two?
Thanks
And I know some of you will think this idea is kinda of stupid, but hey, I'm 14. Don't be hating 
Cath, I already HAD a plot line idea about them falling in love and such, but I found it stereotypical and decided against it.
I don't like short stories, and I have already written novels, and plan to get them published, so maybe you should answer the question, and not assume I'm just a regular teenage girl writing a regular never-going-to-get-finished novel.
I'm not one of those people, and I plan on being a novelist when I am older. I am just stuck at the moment and need a little bit of inspiration. Thanks
The point of view of this story is 1st person (**the boy**)
Anyways here's the gist of the idea:
There's a 15 year old guy, and he doesn't know who his father is. (What he also doesn't know is that he is a demi-angel. His mom had had him with an angel. This is against the *angel rules* and so there was a curse put on him. This curse is that he can only see death and evil and rot, never beauty.) So this boy, who can only see everything as evil with no beauty, finds this one girl.
This one girl, is pretty much the opposite of this boy. Her father had her with a demon, making this girl a demi-demon. Now this girl also does not know who her mother is, and why she sees everything so beautiful. (As it is against the demon rules to have a kid with a human, she has a curse put on her.) Being half demon, this girl doesn't like beauty.
The reason the boy can see the girl normally is because she has no inner beauty.
This is the idea^ but I have no plot line. I don't know what should happen with theses two characters. I don't know whether to make the girl the antagonist, or just the protagonist's (the boy) friend/lover. I was thinking maybe they use each other to find out about their parents? Could you help me think of a plot idea for what should happen to theses two?
Thanks
And I know some of you will think this idea is kinda of stupid, but hey, I'm 14. Don't be hating Cath, I already HAD a plot line idea about them falling in love and such, but I found it stereotypical and decided against it.
I don't like short stories, and I have already written novels, and plan to get them published, so maybe you should answer the question, and not assume I'm just a regular teenage girl writing a regular never-going-to-get-finished novel.
I'm not one of those people, and I plan on being a novelist when I am older. I am just stuck at the moment and need a little bit of inspiration. Thanks