so im not really good at this. that's why am asking for help. help me critique this like what are its bad/corny/ worthless lines.
so motivated i feel 10 feet tall
midgets tryna block ma shot by the way i ball?
verse not edible bitch im raw
mainstream joke just suck acts like straw
putt'em behind my rap bars disobeyin the law
fake 'G' swag, i punchline they crawl
i got zero gravity newtons, i never fall
spits on target, possess a bull's eye ball
crush your jaw, i never withdraw
aint waitin for no bell there's no draw
for ya stance south paw i gotta chainsaw
slaughter you mentaly lyricaly im 'saw'
ima go hard i might smash the Great Wall
so spring lyricaly my season won't fall
got that greenhouse effect cause an ozone hole
i know i went in refs call me a field goal
so motivated i feel 10 feet tall
midgets tryna block ma shot by the way i ball?
verse not edible bitch im raw
mainstream joke just suck acts like straw
putt'em behind my rap bars disobeyin the law
fake 'G' swag, i punchline they crawl
i got zero gravity newtons, i never fall
spits on target, possess a bull's eye ball
crush your jaw, i never withdraw
aint waitin for no bell there's no draw
for ya stance south paw i gotta chainsaw
slaughter you mentaly lyricaly im 'saw'
ima go hard i might smash the Great Wall
so spring lyricaly my season won't fall
got that greenhouse effect cause an ozone hole
i know i went in refs call me a field goal