help me with my poem please?

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Jennifer M

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Alright so im trying to write a poem for my gf and i absolutely suck out loud with words. I am unable to express myself the way I want so far this is what I have

Always will my heart beat for you
Sharing every moment of love with you
Hoping to one day hold you in my arms
Loving every second with you
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I don't know if it already sucks but can someone help me out lol I'm trying to do her name and at the moment I'm more inclined to run and get her flowers
 
Always will my heart beat for you
Sharing every moment of love with you
Hoping to one day hold you in my arms
Loving every second with you
Everlasting adoration for your sparkling <insert color here> eyes (:
Your stunning smile has me wrapped around your finger

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