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Dear Office of Financial Aid,
My name is John Doe. I would like to appeal my suspension of financial aid. I am not being suspended because I did not complete at least 67% of attempted units in college. I decided to go back to college in the semester of Spring 2009. I enrolled in nine units and a total of three classes and got an A in all of my classes. I have been perfect ever since I decided to go back to college. I am currently taking three units right now for the Summer semester. I am currently working over 50 hours per week, trying to save up money to get me through college. I want to cut back to part-time work for the Fall semester. I plan switch back to a full-time work schedule if I do not receive my Pell Grant. I have enrolled in 12 units this Fall but may not be able to do so because of work. Receiving financial aid will make all the difference for me. I have plans of completing all of my general education courses at Mesa and Miramar college, before transferring to SDSU to pursue my bachelor's degree in Business Administration.
Please help me revise my appeal letter!
It's so stupid they still want to make me appeal for this year even though I did PERFECT last semester.
My name is John Doe. I would like to appeal my suspension of financial aid. I am not being suspended because I did not complete at least 67% of attempted units in college. I decided to go back to college in the semester of Spring 2009. I enrolled in nine units and a total of three classes and got an A in all of my classes. I have been perfect ever since I decided to go back to college. I am currently taking three units right now for the Summer semester. I am currently working over 50 hours per week, trying to save up money to get me through college. I want to cut back to part-time work for the Fall semester. I plan switch back to a full-time work schedule if I do not receive my Pell Grant. I have enrolled in 12 units this Fall but may not be able to do so because of work. Receiving financial aid will make all the difference for me. I have plans of completing all of my general education courses at Mesa and Miramar college, before transferring to SDSU to pursue my bachelor's degree in Business Administration.
Please help me revise my appeal letter!
It's so stupid they still want to make me appeal for this year even though I did PERFECT last semester.