Ballerina216
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Hi =) So I've has begun writing a story, and I was wondering if you could please give me advice on how to improve anything about it--what you think of the plot, writing style, etc. I've posted it here:
http://www.worthyofpublishing.com/book.asp?book_ID=14273
It’s fairly short, but you don't have to read it all if you don't want to-Just please read enough to answer!
The short summary that readers see before clicking on the book is this:
Kayla woke up not knowing who she is or where she comes from. When she begins to think that she may be more than human, she is put in danger as someone seeks revenge...
I think it's a really bad summary that doesn't represent the book very well...after reading it, do you have any suggestions to improve it in ways that will attract more readers and feedback from the site itself?
I know that I have posted this question before, but I haven't been getting the kind of answers I'm looking for. I am looking for ways to IMPROVE my story, so answers such as "your story's great!", while nice to hear, are not what I am looking for. Best answer goes to the person who helps me the most with constructive criticism on the writing and the plot.
Thank you so, so much for helping me with anything! =) =) =)
Also, if you would like me to answer your question, just leave a link and I will try to do so!!!! =)
http://www.worthyofpublishing.com/book.asp?book_ID=14273
It’s fairly short, but you don't have to read it all if you don't want to-Just please read enough to answer!
The short summary that readers see before clicking on the book is this:
Kayla woke up not knowing who she is or where she comes from. When she begins to think that she may be more than human, she is put in danger as someone seeks revenge...
I think it's a really bad summary that doesn't represent the book very well...after reading it, do you have any suggestions to improve it in ways that will attract more readers and feedback from the site itself?
I know that I have posted this question before, but I haven't been getting the kind of answers I'm looking for. I am looking for ways to IMPROVE my story, so answers such as "your story's great!", while nice to hear, are not what I am looking for. Best answer goes to the person who helps me the most with constructive criticism on the writing and the plot.
Thank you so, so much for helping me with anything! =) =) =)
Also, if you would like me to answer your question, just leave a link and I will try to do so!!!! =)