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Help me fix this paragraph for a comparison/contrast essay.. due tomorrow! please help..
Everyone should keep a professional attitude at work, and more importantly, managers should always keep theirs’ in line as well, regardless of any type of personality they may have. Kassie, at times, can have a strict and demanding personality, although, she is also compassionate towards others feelings at the same time; I’ve never seen her act unprofessional at work. She’s always good with advice and gives reasonable time for her employees to complete any task she assigns. However, Margie has had a history of being a “gossip queen“. Myself and other employees at the salon would hear her talk about other employees in a bad way, and sometimes even say disrespectful things about the owners. When I first met her, right away I could tell she had an extremely laid-back personality and I couldn’t even understand how she could possibly be the manager there.
Everyone should keep a professional attitude at work, and more importantly, managers should always keep theirs’ in line as well, regardless of any type of personality they may have. Kassie, at times, can have a strict and demanding personality, although, she is also compassionate towards others feelings at the same time; I’ve never seen her act unprofessional at work. She’s always good with advice and gives reasonable time for her employees to complete any task she assigns. However, Margie has had a history of being a “gossip queen“. Myself and other employees at the salon would hear her talk about other employees in a bad way, and sometimes even say disrespectful things about the owners. When I first met her, right away I could tell she had an extremely laid-back personality and I couldn’t even understand how she could possibly be the manager there.