HELP! ESSAY! BIOLOGY, THESIS STATEMENT!?

Jessica

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I have a paper I'm trying to edit. I'm really having a hard time thinking straight. It's brutal for me when I try to come up with a thesis statement. I'm trying to say "The scientific outcome and/or facts from studies in the laboratory, investigation and surroundings sampling showed a consistency of where most outbreaks of illnesses with exposures in Farm Petting Zoo’s. " but I'm not sure how to reword that =( any suggestions
 
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