help and rewiew of this poem?

[st.germaine]

i need an opinion on this poem i wrote. its about love being 2 faced. i think its a bit messy but cant tell. help?

here it is

The world ends with me
I am Armageddon
I live in the hearts and souls of men
Yet nobody actually sees

I am power
I am the fuel of human kind
I have made powerful men cower
And still the people are blind

I’m thought of as the most powerful good
And yet my other side is ignored
The human soul I can pollute
I am at the very core of people scorned

I am the angel
I am the omen
I am mostly neutral
I am the hammer of hearts broken

I am just a compliment of humanity
To the needs of men I adapt
I adapt to hate as well as purity
I am a tangible force, and a mighty force at that


Do you want to know what I am?
I am love
The love a man has for his wife
The love that makes people into killers

The love a girl has for her friends
The love a man has for blood
I am the root of nurture
I am the root of obsession

The world began with me
The world will end with me
After all
Apocalypse is just a higher beings love gone wrong
Yes indeed…..the world ends with me

 

[TropicalSun]

Clever and heart filled, but it doesn't really "flow."