Help adding "Zoom In" sentences in story? (Just need 5 sentences)?

A.G.M.

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Yesterday our class went on an exciting trip to the Soco Gardens Zoo. We were all excited and suprised because it was so "COLD!" We were all "FREEZING!"

When we finally arrived at the zoo, we visited the giant aquarium. it had angel fish that were as beautiful as real angels.

Later on we went to see the African animals in their native habitat.Suddenly we saw black and white zebras zoom past us. We saw the chimpanzees and monkeys. in the meantime, they were swinging and prouncing from branch to branch.

The last animals we saw were the snowy white polar bears. The polar bears yawned and their teeth were razor sharp. Just then I backed away a little.

When our teacher said it was time to go, none of the children were ready to leave. I never thought you could be so cold and have so much fun.
 
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