Heaven and Hell poems?

[J-SeXstasy]

Yeah They're a few months old, They're from my myspace blog but felt like posting? Constructive critism is ALWAYS welcome, but bashings get reported. So plz no bashing or any of that crap.

Heaven

Eternal bliss,
Forever lasting ecstasy,
No more reasons to cry,
Happiness concqueres all misery.

Lies are truths,
Bones become ashes,
Creations are great,
Not one person is alone.

Hell

Worries and doubts,
Torment and pain,
Tortured with memories,
Meant to drive you insane.

Corpses on flames,
Nothing ever heals,
There's no good or bad,
Niceness doesn't exist; hatred is beyong real.

 

[Modest the Prince]

This is a good poem written short style. This is something that I would write and in this style too.