yeah, although not sure how good mine are though. The stage directions and the descriptions are what i'm bad at. I tend to tell instead of show.
I knew there would be competition. I just had a feeling that i f i submitted it that someone else would have submitted it at roughly the same time.
If you want i can pm you my email address and you can send snippets or things like that without telling the wider internet community.
I'm trying to get some comedy in the first episode with the Dursley's and another well known character in the HP universe who if you have in, you have to make fun of, whilst trying to have some real drama. There's one character whose scenes are really ambiguous (i hope for the viewer) but really powerful and really emotional. Not sure if i have done those scenes justice. I'll pm you those scenes if you want.
Just came up with something to do with Vernon.