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kerangoumar
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i have a different suggestion:
humanize the facts. a catchy headline won't bring a collection of dry facts to life and your readers will lose interest by paragraph 2, guaranteed.
rewrite the article - let's say you are able to focus it on a known survivor - perhaps someone who went thru hell and was found long after s/he was supposed to be dead.
then the headline will suggest itself. trust me.
humanize the facts. a catchy headline won't bring a collection of dry facts to life and your readers will lose interest by paragraph 2, guaranteed.
rewrite the article - let's say you are able to focus it on a known survivor - perhaps someone who went thru hell and was found long after s/he was supposed to be dead.
then the headline will suggest itself. trust me.