Good Intro to my Story?

Aaron Eveland

New member
how does this sound as the begining of a story?
Http://TDOUI.webs.com/Story.Doc
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my other question:
http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index;_ylt=AtEhr.Y6h6UEU3evTWD6bKYM_dw4;_ylv=3?qid=20110126001654AAz2TZM
 
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