So here is the blurb of my book, i want instructive crtisism well i don't want it but if you have it give it to me.
Elena Hayden just thinks she is an ordinary orphan until she follows a man and discovers the magical Ironwald the wizarding side of our London, and gets enrolled in the wizarding academy of upcoming wizards and witches, known throughout Ironwald for its teaching to all the greats, good and bad, and here Elena will find unlikely friendship in a wizard and a Frapspurg follow the education and quest of Elena’s to find out how she could pass through the mystical barriers of London to Ironwald and how she posses magic powers with no magic blood in her?
Yesi know it is a bit like Harry Potter but you aren't writing it, it may have a few similarities but when it is written and if you ever read it you will realise it is not like it, everyone thinks the vampire books are all like twilight but there not so please don't critisise me
Elena Hayden just thinks she is an ordinary orphan until she follows a man and discovers the magical Ironwald the wizarding side of our London, and gets enrolled in the wizarding academy of upcoming wizards and witches, known throughout Ironwald for its teaching to all the greats, good and bad, and here Elena will find unlikely friendship in a wizard and a Frapspurg follow the education and quest of Elena’s to find out how she could pass through the mystical barriers of London to Ironwald and how she posses magic powers with no magic blood in her?
Yesi know it is a bit like Harry Potter but you aren't writing it, it may have a few similarities but when it is written and if you ever read it you will realise it is not like it, everyone thinks the vampire books are all like twilight but there not so please don't critisise me