freedom from form forget poets in the ruling class?

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free verse poeteering attempt
I will call it

forced lasic

my eyes are surgical
peal away your layers
filth the color of my contacts
my addiction, dreaming
american psychotic
*cough*
*wheeze*
*cough*
*wheeze*
"lucid, I am
your faith"
JOIN ME
"I find your lack
of father, disturbing"
ON THE DARK SIDE
reality can be too
section off philosophy
"does the secrete work
is it real?"
the secrete is
they will take your
$$$$$$$$$$$$$$
the key word is work
sound like cognitive
therapy, or sedation
like the cotton in your
ears, is this corny
sample my art
it is plain
old
fashion
common
sense
Hey do not make fun of my vader impression!
sight is a sense, that all share, when we dream of the future.
this is the notion that makes me mention the common
happy you keep poping up
but your criticism is less like a critique
and more like empty insults
where is the venom?
 
Freedom of form...does that mean somebody needs to mop up the mess in the hallway?

Of common sense I lack
Mine is of a less common nature
None the less pleasing but more
.....exclusively
.......
...........mine
 
hidden
in lines
laughing in faces
turned from the real
a slap does a body good

your words are full
taste great, more filling
fuels for fodder
so you bother
to speak from the hip
blood on your lip
tripping up the slow
motion affected few
that may not get
you
 
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