**FOR POETS** Do you think this poem is good?

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Poem:

Fun

Where did my fun go?
In a flash of a second,
It seems - my fun ran away from me

As time is traded for responsibility
Play time - turns into pressure
Day and night - homework swarms over you
like bees protecting its nest

What will happen to me as I grow older?
It unfolds to my mind as clear as a lightbulb
A weary boy, calling to his fun,
as his fun backs away, and away
like a scared dog

As I disappear in the misty darkness
My fun shouts for joy on the glowing moonlight
like a howling wolf.
What is going to happen to me?
 
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