First Time Poet Poem: What do you think of these lines Ol'Joker threw together..?

[The Joker]

I know its not an actual poem...its kind of my first.

I don't have a title for it. Suggestions are welcome.
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Its down in the alleys and the pools of piss
We watched the sun rise and talked about the power of myth
About whether a wandering clown could ever truly start to live
Its just another night, another motel, us talking about things better left unsaid.
Or a friend I forgot long ago, letting me sleep on his pull-out bed
Faces blur my mind and I know they won’t last
The greatest friend in the world, will soon be a memory past
And, me, I haven't eaten in days; my appetite can't fill the gap
I just poison my blood and wander through the hours
Hoping to find an audience that will smile and clap
So I clean the paint off my face, I say enough is enough
I’m up at dawn; I’ll kiss your sleeping head.
I'm leaving but I don't know where to.
Yes, I’m leaving but I don’t know where to.

: )

 

[Mark Ronson]

Pretty effin' epic my friend

 

[thethinker234]

that was actually really good

 

[Miss K]

I like.

(title) Nomad ?

 

[εϊз αღỹ εϊз]

I dont like the serious Joker - it creeps me out.

That being said, i think it was really good.

 

[David M.]

waitin for the sequel....applauds

 

[Rj Z]

Dude...no BS..no jokes...that was pretty damn good.

 

[Pitybluesboy]

Very good.
Now can you set it to music and become a joker rock star?
It's a lot better than much of today's verses.
No Joke!