First attempt at non-rhyming, -Redo, What do you thing? (It's for a funeral, so

Wind

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I really need perfection)? Really want this to be special, I've posted once, but since improved.


Beautiful, you always are,
as you lay with out motion on your bed,
no effort required,
you stare into the skies above,
dreaming,

I look down at you
Brushing your hair aside,
still glaring, not a sound
you talk to me,
with out moving your mouth
I see it in your eyes
5 years I've seen them eyes
Yet to bore me,
they still amaze me,

Your lips sealed shut
hiding words
ever the tease,
you leave me guessing,
what's on your mind

Tranquil,

A brief tap on the shoulder,
Disrupts what was,
a man, sharply dressed
nods at me,

I look down, to you
In your little black box,
In which you hide,
cold, and still,

My eye's now moist from sorrow,
As I struggle to realize

where you've gone,
for your body may be here,
but your soul will live on
 
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