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River Elise

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Snow-
The world is so restless.
When you come down,
you swallow all the clamor of this city.
Amity warms my ears-
Silent snow.

Snow-
You fall like a sleepy feather.
When you come down,
delicate designs start sleeping on our roof tops.
Calming all my senses so I can exist.
Embellishing snow.

Snow-
Such a ruthless form of rain.
When you come down,
You set into my bones and shiver all these limbs.
Freezing all the flowers, show no mercy.
Callous snow.
 
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