fathers day is coming up and i wrote a poem what do u think?

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socks

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many times i've needed you
many times i've wept
many times i've wished
that you had never left

Many times i've said
i'd do anything to have you back
many times i've dreamed
your heart had no attack

many times i've shed a tear
when i was all alone
many times i've wished
that you could come back home

many times i've wanted you
many times i've cried
many times i've wished
that you had never died


thoughts?
 
thats really good. it made me all teary eyed. im sorry about your father, if thats why you wrote this. it must be very hard :(
 
i think tht was beautiful im startin 2 write poetry nd i have 2 say tht was great nd the best thing is tht it came from ur heart its tht pure love =)
 
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