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you need thirdly & in conclusion. where is your thesis?
i've to finish my essay and I must give to the university by this week
Can anyone help me to check the grammar ? i think it's not so good ,though
thanks in advanced
As Japan is regarded to be one of the most astonishing countries in the world, many people are aiming to visit and explore this country. I’m also one of those who have always been desiring to further my studies and broaden my experiences in Japan someday in the future.
There are two main reasons that make me interested in Japan. First, Japan is a highly developed country in the world. Japan is accepted as one of the world’s leaders in technology fields. Besides, Japanese industries have been expanded in many countries and they produce many high quality products which are considered to be one of the best. However, not only its blooming trade, but also its civilization that charms me. Most of the cities in Japan are modernized, additionally, the standard of living is high and safe. Nonetheless, there still remains the real Japanese culture in some regions. The Japanese architectural temples and houses are still existed or even the traditional dress is being worn until nowadays. So I can truly say that I really impressed in Japan’s proper mixtures of both modernity and its primitive heritage which the Japanese have conserved them from generation to generations.
Secondly, Japanese people are nice and approachable. As I was an exchange student abroad and got to know many people from different countries, the Japanese were apparently the most sociable and open to everyone. They were generous and always helpful, so I really appreciated their kindness and I started getting to love Japanese people since that. Moreover, the Japanese are loyal to their nation, religion and the Emperor as the Thais are. The expression of their honesty and patriotism profoundly engraves me. So this ensures I would certainly get along with Japanese people. Therefore, these reasons I’ve mentioned above build my curiosity to learn more about Japan.
ps. this is just one part of the whole essay, so this is why there is no conclusion
Can anyone help me to check the grammar ? i think it's not so good ,though
thanks in advanced
As Japan is regarded to be one of the most astonishing countries in the world, many people are aiming to visit and explore this country. I’m also one of those who have always been desiring to further my studies and broaden my experiences in Japan someday in the future.
There are two main reasons that make me interested in Japan. First, Japan is a highly developed country in the world. Japan is accepted as one of the world’s leaders in technology fields. Besides, Japanese industries have been expanded in many countries and they produce many high quality products which are considered to be one of the best. However, not only its blooming trade, but also its civilization that charms me. Most of the cities in Japan are modernized, additionally, the standard of living is high and safe. Nonetheless, there still remains the real Japanese culture in some regions. The Japanese architectural temples and houses are still existed or even the traditional dress is being worn until nowadays. So I can truly say that I really impressed in Japan’s proper mixtures of both modernity and its primitive heritage which the Japanese have conserved them from generation to generations.
Secondly, Japanese people are nice and approachable. As I was an exchange student abroad and got to know many people from different countries, the Japanese were apparently the most sociable and open to everyone. They were generous and always helpful, so I really appreciated their kindness and I started getting to love Japanese people since that. Moreover, the Japanese are loyal to their nation, religion and the Emperor as the Thais are. The expression of their honesty and patriotism profoundly engraves me. So this ensures I would certainly get along with Japanese people. Therefore, these reasons I’ve mentioned above build my curiosity to learn more about Japan.
ps. this is just one part of the whole essay, so this is why there is no conclusion
