ESSAY HELP , word choice.!?

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I have to write an essay about whether i think homework is good or bad .


i chose to talk about both sides ,

The closing to my intro paragraph ends with " it can help and harm you in many ways"
i feel like its a bad 5th grade essay when i say that .
what else can i say to get across the same idea but sound more like a 10th grader . ?
 
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