efficient communication

[sgbf]

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[wammer369]

edit:done

 

[Ngo Liverpool]

well no thanks to any crit on the forum, i've decided where to take this one.

whaddya think

 

[ai_fan08]

I like this a lot, especially the last line

 

[Brown]

It's good, but you really can't type the "ou" in "your"?

 

[.!.!.!.!.!.!]

@mike: thanks

poetic license bro

i like that abbreviation, it adRAB to the urgency of the poem i think

 

[omololu]

John approves:thumb: