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Jsmith15
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The main character is trapped with his girlfriend on the 26th floor of an office building that is collapsing into an inferno.To escape the man ties a curtain around a desk and jumps off the balcony with is girlfriend hanging on to his shoulders.After realizing that the curtain was only long enough to get him down seven floors, he and his girlfriend jump from the curtain to another building with a giant banner on the side of it and they grab it and it rips all the way down to the ground, allowing them to reach the ground and safety...for a moment.
The real question is does it sound appropriate for the type of story im writing? It's a fantasy story, but im not sure it fits! Please help!
The real question is does it sound appropriate for the type of story im writing? It's a fantasy story, but im not sure it fits! Please help!