does this poem sound okay?????

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Calorifer

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doesn't rhyme ... so at least make it funny or catchy ...
or get a couple of verses out of another poem like Invictus by William E. Henley
 
hey guys this is a poem i made for my girlfriend



" behind these still trees of silence,
Beauty gazes by these midnight flowers,
the moonlight shimmers in the light of this goddess,
a princess awaiting her prince charming"

do u think she'll like it???
 
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