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DON'T LEAVE THE QUESTION JUST BECAUSE IT'S LONG PLEASE, I TRIED TO MAKE IT NOT BORING LIKE I ALWAYS TRY TO!!!!
A man wakes up in a tent under the rain, he doesn't know who he is or what is going on at all. He leaves the tent to find a boy who has been taking care of him while he was in a coma of sorts, the main character in dept to the boy decides to accompany the boy were ever he is going until he can get a grip on what is going on. He discovers the reason he was in a coma was because he was being prepared by some unknown force to aquire super natural abilities. after a while of unlocking his strange telekenetic powers he starts to get visions and hear voices in his head and it leads him to believe that he has some powerful enemies that he doesn't even know. eventually he arrives with the boy at the home of his patron that has been manipulating the boy for some time and has promised to give him information on the location of his main target if the boy runs a whole bunch of errands for him. the boy's skill at performing these errands are what keeps his patron from actually telling the boy what he needs to know. but you don't find that out until later on... anyway the patron tells the boy to run one final errand and so the boys does and he realizes the errands had in common, they all created chaos for people both the main character and the boy are slightly angered by this so they move quickly back to the home of the patron and find only a blood mark on the ground that says 'west' so they go west and arrive at a temple were there was no one there except a ragged old man who claims that he was a good friend of the main guy before he lost his memory... the old man had been taken away by people long ago and the boy was looking for him because the boy knew him too and also the boy was look for the people that took the old guy away because they killed his mother. anyway they found out from the old man that the people had left recently ( because the patron guy from earlier was about to reveal their location but u don't know that until later) and the old guy says they went to some small remote contenent. so they set off and find a burned suffering village along the way. all the people there had their toungues cut out and could communicate only that the people they were looking for (the people that killed the boy's mother) could be found by talking to some guy by the shore. so they do, and the guy by the shore takes them to contenent were they had to go to find the people... so the arrive at the place and it's all snowy and cold and they eventually find the base they need to go to and it's filled with the murderers that killed the boys mother and the village nearby etc. anyway the main character is somewhat of a pacifist and refuses to use his strange power to kill so the boy does most of the killing and the main character accidently kills some people when only trying to stun them. after a long bloody battle of only 1.5 against like 400, they arrive at the top of the base and see that the father of the boy (who had killed his mother and was in charge of all the bad dudes) trying to summon a demon and he had almost done it until they arrived. the only reason that he had been able to summon it was because he had sort of the same power that the main character had and had got it from the old guy from the ruins from earlier just like the main character had got it from him, only he didn't go into a coma for more than like 2 days while the main character went through it for like 200 years. anyway the boy ends up killing the father and gets his vengence and after the almost-summoned demon appears the main character sees that it was the on from his visions and that it had been sent to either persuade him to become evil of to kill him but for now the demon is stopped and the boy filled with saddness for giving into his hatred, asks the main character to teach him the ways of peace and to teach him also how to use magic. Oh and by the way the patron had a theatrical death right when they met the boys father by having his back impaled with a thick weapon, kinda sad but what ever. so the main character takes the creature that the boy's father had used to ride on and rides on it himself (only he doesn't wip it like the other guy did) and they set off to assist the burned village but the book ends before they get there and this is the first book in a trilogy of epicness. tell me what you think please.
A man wakes up in a tent under the rain, he doesn't know who he is or what is going on at all. He leaves the tent to find a boy who has been taking care of him while he was in a coma of sorts, the main character in dept to the boy decides to accompany the boy were ever he is going until he can get a grip on what is going on. He discovers the reason he was in a coma was because he was being prepared by some unknown force to aquire super natural abilities. after a while of unlocking his strange telekenetic powers he starts to get visions and hear voices in his head and it leads him to believe that he has some powerful enemies that he doesn't even know. eventually he arrives with the boy at the home of his patron that has been manipulating the boy for some time and has promised to give him information on the location of his main target if the boy runs a whole bunch of errands for him. the boy's skill at performing these errands are what keeps his patron from actually telling the boy what he needs to know. but you don't find that out until later on... anyway the patron tells the boy to run one final errand and so the boys does and he realizes the errands had in common, they all created chaos for people both the main character and the boy are slightly angered by this so they move quickly back to the home of the patron and find only a blood mark on the ground that says 'west' so they go west and arrive at a temple were there was no one there except a ragged old man who claims that he was a good friend of the main guy before he lost his memory... the old man had been taken away by people long ago and the boy was looking for him because the boy knew him too and also the boy was look for the people that took the old guy away because they killed his mother. anyway they found out from the old man that the people had left recently ( because the patron guy from earlier was about to reveal their location but u don't know that until later) and the old guy says they went to some small remote contenent. so they set off and find a burned suffering village along the way. all the people there had their toungues cut out and could communicate only that the people they were looking for (the people that killed the boy's mother) could be found by talking to some guy by the shore. so they do, and the guy by the shore takes them to contenent were they had to go to find the people... so the arrive at the place and it's all snowy and cold and they eventually find the base they need to go to and it's filled with the murderers that killed the boys mother and the village nearby etc. anyway the main character is somewhat of a pacifist and refuses to use his strange power to kill so the boy does most of the killing and the main character accidently kills some people when only trying to stun them. after a long bloody battle of only 1.5 against like 400, they arrive at the top of the base and see that the father of the boy (who had killed his mother and was in charge of all the bad dudes) trying to summon a demon and he had almost done it until they arrived. the only reason that he had been able to summon it was because he had sort of the same power that the main character had and had got it from the old guy from the ruins from earlier just like the main character had got it from him, only he didn't go into a coma for more than like 2 days while the main character went through it for like 200 years. anyway the boy ends up killing the father and gets his vengence and after the almost-summoned demon appears the main character sees that it was the on from his visions and that it had been sent to either persuade him to become evil of to kill him but for now the demon is stopped and the boy filled with saddness for giving into his hatred, asks the main character to teach him the ways of peace and to teach him also how to use magic. Oh and by the way the patron had a theatrical death right when they met the boys father by having his back impaled with a thick weapon, kinda sad but what ever. so the main character takes the creature that the boy's father had used to ride on and rides on it himself (only he doesn't wip it like the other guy did) and they set off to assist the burned village but the book ends before they get there and this is the first book in a trilogy of epicness. tell me what you think please.