Do you think my poem is good?

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Brittany D

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Too Many Thoughts

Too many thoughts,
So little room!

To think of us,
To think of you!

Too many dreams,
That can't come true!

Not enough,
Of me and you!

A sad moment,
I can See!

Too little room,
Too little space to believe!
 
A nice little poem, easy to read and thoughtful about thinking. Try writing a three line poem next. Have fun with thoughts and words I can see you are enjoying what you have done so far. Keep writing.
 
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