do you think my poem is good? and can u help me finish it?

laura f

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No worries on my mind
Sitting by my bedroom window
Looking towards the sun-kissed sea
Seagulls flying, praying for food
The waves,
crashing down the shore
The sea seems peaceful

thats it , but i would like it if u finished it please and can u add some similes or hyperboles/personification or metaphors? atleast one please and thank you!
 
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