Do you like this poem I wrote?

[Madeleine]

I am the Silent One
You do not see, but I am here
You do not see my pain
I do not shed a tear

I suffer in silence
Feeling so alone
I have no friends to count on
I’m here all on my own

I am the Silent One
Older than my years
I keep all of their secrets
I hide from you my fears

You think I do not notice
When you look and laugh at me
You think that I don’t care
But it hurts me to see

I am the Silent One
I’m hopelessly lost
I’ve numbed myself from feeling
My heart is full of frost

So look and when you see me
Stop and lend a hand
Help me to the light again
Help me to take a stand

I am the Silent One
I can’t speak for myself
But with your gentle guidance
I can surely be helped

 

[wibbly-wobbly]

A great poem - and something which resonates deep within.
Well done you!

 

[ec_sincity]

Yes , pretty good

How about turning that into a song ?? .. with the right music it would be even better

 

[bijja]

A simple but touchy poem.

 

[Melancaholic]

WOW!!! That is really good... it's perfect. I can relate.