Do you like this poem i wrote?

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DanceObsessed

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I know I already posted this, but for some weird reason Yahoo! made me pick the best answer the next day. Sooooo, here it is again:

Teach me the way to be humble and good
Because I don't know who that is in the mirror
All I see is a mask
A mask of goodness
That isn't me
Then I see you...
The only person that knows the real me
But you shouldn't know the real me
its too dangerous for you
so you will now see what everybody else sees...
invisibility
 
Wow! t

You really put power in this. I didn't know that anyone else felt as I do. I'm astonished, and I see a future in writing for you.

Thank you for posting this.

As soon as your post shows up, edit and extend the deadline. It gives you a full week.
 
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