Do you like this poem. i know this is the wrong section but i didn't get answers

Amanda

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in the poetry section? I'm going to change it a lot, its not really done. but do you like it

nobody can see her tears
nobody knows her fears

it was one night
she wants to forget

but she doesn't know how
she will never feel the same

she wants it all to stop
she doesn't want to feel the pain

underneath her fear
she hides with all the makeup

she thinks nobody will ever understand
she doesn't want anyone to know

she doesn't know what to do
so she just grabs the gun

she feels how cold it is
and then she pulls the trigger
 
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