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A Valentines Poem
Roses are red
Violets are blue
Every single second
I'm thinking of you
I love your cute smile
And your cozy hugs
When you're absent in school
My whole day sucks
Im sad when youre sad
I cry when you cry
I laugh when you luahg
if you die ill die
holding hands in the park
walking in the rain
giving me your jacket so I wont get wet
making sure im not in pain
i write your name on my foggy window
a heart between me and you
i love how much you say you love me
honestly i do
to summarize this poem
made just for you
a question i have
im nervouse to ask...
Could you be my Valentine ???
Why?
why did you have to go
why did you leave me
in my dreams, i saw all that we could be
u were the prince and i was the princess
you in your suit and me in my dress
dancing swiftly till midnight
knowing everything is allright
im just a lonely girl who cries, & cries, & cries
Knowing all you ever told me were lies, & lies, & lies
I wish my dream would come true
being in your cozy arms
I guess it wont happen
Cuz you wanted me harmed
You werent worth it
you didnt love me
No, you allready had your chance, no more
Wouldnt you agree?
thats all the poems i've written so far
what do you rate them
1. A valentines poem
2. Why?
anything i could change/move/etc ??
Roses are red
Violets are blue
Every single second
I'm thinking of you
I love your cute smile
And your cozy hugs
When you're absent in school
My whole day sucks
Im sad when youre sad
I cry when you cry
I laugh when you luahg
if you die ill die
holding hands in the park
walking in the rain
giving me your jacket so I wont get wet
making sure im not in pain
i write your name on my foggy window
a heart between me and you
i love how much you say you love me
honestly i do
to summarize this poem
made just for you
a question i have
im nervouse to ask...
Could you be my Valentine ???
Why?
why did you have to go
why did you leave me
in my dreams, i saw all that we could be
u were the prince and i was the princess
you in your suit and me in my dress
dancing swiftly till midnight
knowing everything is allright
im just a lonely girl who cries, & cries, & cries
Knowing all you ever told me were lies, & lies, & lies
I wish my dream would come true
being in your cozy arms
I guess it wont happen
Cuz you wanted me harmed
You werent worth it
you didnt love me
No, you allready had your chance, no more
Wouldnt you agree?
thats all the poems i've written so far
what do you rate them
1. A valentines poem
2. Why?
anything i could change/move/etc ??