Okay, don't critisize it too much. I'm still working on it but i'll have you read the first paragraph. So don't say it sucks just say how i can make it better.
Okay, there's this creepy dude following me. I have no idea who he is. He has light curly blonde hair, dark brown eyes and a smile that makes you want to fart. (which isn't a good thing!) Anyways i'm in Store N mart. Ya, weird name. But this store has everything! Pants to candy, shoes to animals.... anything! And anyways he's following me and it's freaky!!! I got to go..... OR ELSE!
Okay, there's this creepy dude following me. I have no idea who he is. He has light curly blonde hair, dark brown eyes and a smile that makes you want to fart. (which isn't a good thing!) Anyways i'm in Store N mart. Ya, weird name. But this store has everything! Pants to candy, shoes to animals.... anything! And anyways he's following me and it's freaky!!! I got to go..... OR ELSE!