The story is going to be entitled Subject One,and it will be about a small pharmaceutical company that has a single set of facilities on each continent,but only a research facility on Antartica.One of the most prominent employees creates an enhancer that can heighten a person's agility,speed, dexterity, and stamina to that of something no man has seen before.The enhancer is secretly administered into a select group of civilians in each continent,and in each facility there is a single subject kept under watch,given the same enhancer,to see what happens to a carrier over time.For ten years,it seems the enhancers did just what they were meant to,until one day the security in the subject holding in North America goes out,and upon investigation,the carrier,Subject One,had undergone a mutation with no apparent cause,and became violent to anything in it's path.
I know it's long,but that's what I have so far.What do you think?
It's about a huge,mutated hyper-enhanced human like creation that goes around killing everything in it's path.I don't really see how that is boring,but I can see that you have too much time on your hands,or you're just plain stupid.
I write everything from first person point of view,but when I try my hand at modern day fiction,I start each section off with an opening that tells the time,place,and who the person telling the story is.
And I have already began to put romance into it,but on a smaller scale.The main character is an employee at the company and has an immensive crush on his boss,but she uses that to her advantage later on.And thanks for the feedback
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I was also thinking of making this an apocalypse story,because civilians were unknowingly injected with the same enhancer as the mutation,so they would also undergo the same change,causing the deadly creatures to spawn randomly across the globe.
I know it's long,but that's what I have so far.What do you think?
It's about a huge,mutated hyper-enhanced human like creation that goes around killing everything in it's path.I don't really see how that is boring,but I can see that you have too much time on your hands,or you're just plain stupid.
I write everything from first person point of view,but when I try my hand at modern day fiction,I start each section off with an opening that tells the time,place,and who the person telling the story is.
And I have already began to put romance into it,but on a smaller scale.The main character is an employee at the company and has an immensive crush on his boss,but she uses that to her advantage later on.And thanks for the feedback
DI was also thinking of making this an apocalypse story,because civilians were unknowingly injected with the same enhancer as the mutation,so they would also undergo the same change,causing the deadly creatures to spawn randomly across the globe.