Your quite the perfect person, flawless I should say.
Your smile makes me melt, your presence makes my day.
From the moment our souls became intertwined,
you've captured my heart and taken over my mind.
Your eyes are the only ease to my pain.
Your laugh, the only sound running through my brain.
You know not who I am, if you did it wouldn't matter.
You wouldn't feel the same and my heart you would shatter.
I shall forever live in mystery, my love for you within.
Never knowing what would happen, what could have been.
Now you can continue your life, the amazing person you are,
as I hurt inside, watching and admiring from afar.
Okay I just wrote this and I know it is pretty rough right now. I'm not a professional writer, actually I'm only fourteen.
I just wanted to know how you guys liked it! I would also appreciate some constructive criticism. Thanks!!
Your smile makes me melt, your presence makes my day.
From the moment our souls became intertwined,
you've captured my heart and taken over my mind.
Your eyes are the only ease to my pain.
Your laugh, the only sound running through my brain.
You know not who I am, if you did it wouldn't matter.
You wouldn't feel the same and my heart you would shatter.
I shall forever live in mystery, my love for you within.
Never knowing what would happen, what could have been.
Now you can continue your life, the amazing person you are,
as I hurt inside, watching and admiring from afar.
Okay I just wrote this and I know it is pretty rough right now. I'm not a professional writer, actually I'm only fourteen.
I just wanted to know how you guys liked it! I would also appreciate some constructive criticism. Thanks!!