Do You Like My "Poem"?

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See, I can see your pain addresses the flame-
Burning insane inside your heart, I feel the same-
But that’s what sets us apart, you feel the blame-
And you exchange the direction that it aims-
You send it directly to me, disrespecting everything I achieve-
We where a team, up until the point you decided to leave-
Divided the joint that ignited my movement-
Now im paralyzed, but I can walk with ease-
It’s the inside feeling, that leaves you with improvement-
One step in front of me, I will just loose it-
If you lose faith in you, I wouldn't know what to do-
I know you hate me, but we can relate see-
That what makes you feel uncomfortable-
Because we are the same-
You want to hide your problems-
But its hard when I feel your pain-
You can’t run away from the fact-
That I am you looking in the mirror back-
 
HMMM....no
too complicated and mostly senseless.
try something more simple
 
very cool,it reminds me of the song "sad but true" by metallica, its also along the same lines,ya should listen to it.
well done once again
 
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