do you like my poem the beginging?

[Skool l]

The Beginning

I Would like to write
structured poetry
into you endless flesh
into your aching heart
perhaps I can ease your pain
empty your mind of all evil
I want my pen to dig deep
into your blissful soul
into your fatigue mind
I started a journey
of life and survival
perhaps its time to write
embrace my words
read my history
perhaps this is the beginning
of a new friendship

 

[s0meone]

love it <3

 

[marinabelle_loves]

i like it. i like to write a lot too. so maybe we could exchange ideas sometime. It really brings out the feeling and still is almost practical.