Do You Like My Poem? I Wrote It Ocourse?

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The Night Sky Is Clear
The Stars Shine Bright
You Sit BesideMe On This
Wonderous Night
We Look Up Into The
Romantic Sky
Our Hearts Are Flying High
Then I See The Star
The Star I Wished On This Night
"StarBright StarLight Thank You For Granting My Wish Tonight."


Called The Star I Wished On Tonight.
 
Very elementary.

It was okay for I'm assumed your young age until halfway through where you stopped keeping tempo. You need to keep the syllables in each line the same or close.
 
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