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angel

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I dream of a better world
Where everything is great
Where there is no such thing as war
And no such thing as hate

Everyone is happy
And no one ever frowns
No one is forgotten
Your friends can’t let you down

We all work together
And never fight or scream
Everything was perfect
When we worked as a team

There were no certain groups
We all were the same
There was no one crying
Because there was no pain

There were no murderers or victims
And no one was in need
No one needed money
Because there is no greed

But no matter what happens
The dream will never come true
Unless we all dream it
And we all make it happen too
 
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