do you like my poem? any improvements?

M

Michelle

New member
"Sister to sister"
Growing up i looked up to you
Trying to follow into your footsteps
thinking i can do what you can do
but i learned that
life was a maze with 2 exits
we faced challenges and blocked paths
and got seperated a few times
as we left through different exits
we started our journeys alone



ahh i really dont like it so what should i change?
 
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