Do you feel any emotion in my poem?

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I had to write a poem for school that had emotion in it and was wondering if it did and what other people thought of it. I like poems that rhyme better so i tried rhyming it but I'm not sure if I did a good job on it. So please give me your opinion on how good the rhyming and the poem is. Thx

My Feelings

Can you see me?
Cowering here in fear.
Do i seem happy?
I'm not as brave as i appear.

I'm really scared,
Of the things yet to come.
You think I'm prepared,
But I'm really just lonesome.

No one understands how feel,
Standing here on my own.
It all feels so surreal,
To be living life alone.

I'm tired of this lifestyle.
Of eating month old curry.
I put up a fake smile,
So you wont have to worry.

My friends at school ask,
"Are you alright?"
I beg without my mask,
"Please help me through this raining night!"

Five years have past since then
My friends got me through my catastrophe
I visit their grave every now and again
I'm enjoying life and feel quite happy.
 
its quite good
however, initially the second and forth lines rhyme
in the third stanza the 1st and third rhyme and second and forth
use more emotive words
i understand the story... it's very clear but not striking as very deep
if you make a few changes it will be even better
all the best
 
well done your poe is really interesting and i would like to read it Again and Again . its like happy and then sad quite sad and happy feeling well done your work is good .
 
well done your poe is really interesting and i would like to read it Again and Again . its like happy and then sad quite sad and happy feeling well done your work is good .
 
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