Do you ever flash back to simpler times?

[Cilla~Needs a drink]

A walk in the dark
down a closed street
smoke filled lungs
and air.
Full moon calls to him ...

Little boy played with
paper airplanes
dreaming one day
they would fly him
far, far away from here.
"To the moon!"

A cigarette on the balcony
the moon, full, yellow
clear tonight
beckoning.
Taking her away ...

Little girl looked at the bride
dancing for her.
Out her window
at the moon,
"Moon, will you be my flashlight
in this purple midnight?"
Do you like my poem? Or have any suggestions to make it even better?

 

[honduranhansens]

very pretty, but a little bit depressing. I liked it

 

[Angie :-)]

I'm not sure what all that poem stuff you wrote is
I don't really fantasize about a cigarette on the balcony or whatever
But I feel like life was simpler when I was a kid

 

[mystical s]

oh yes i love it i do take a trip back in my mind all the time . sometimes i wish i was there all over again . yes i remember those

 

[its.ana]

Bravo! This is just a beautiful piece of art!

 

[The Mensur]

is this a question? or are you just showing every one you poem? It's a great poem, i just don't see a question anywhere in the details section.