do u like my poems????????? ther short?

[Avril's #1 Fan]

1

Theres been a lot of stories in my life
That had some better endings
But even tho
life gets harder
it makes u a lot stronger
And every step u take
Opens a door
To a new story in ur life
So when u feel like it’s the end
And u have no whare to go
Don’t let go yet
Bcuz thers always guna b a blank page
The next day
but just remember
To let go of yesterday
and pray for a tomorrow
and hope that it’ll be the best day…

#2

I don't wana believe
What seems to b true
Because I’m scared
Of what might happen
If the truth
Is just a dream
That will never b reality

#3

Ur a like a puzzle with missing pieces
So ill never b able to put u together
But did u ever think that those missing pieces
Might just b me?


i like to rite poetry but im not sure if ther good so what do u think?

r they good for my age? im 13.
i no this is supposed to b in poetry but i wasnt getting a lot of answers...

thanks!

 

[sara bear]

They'd be better if you used proper grammar.

 

[joy k]

I like them, but, wow , those seem really deep

 

[Master Bates]

yeah they're sweet

 

[Coffee Junkie]

excellent rap

 

[Apocalyptis Mortis]

I'd get Hoooked On Phonics before trying another poem.