Do i write good poetry?

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Will

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i recently tried to write poetry and a girl said i was good,
but i want to know what you think...

1. i am only 14 so what you say,could highly impact my life
2. i don't plan on being a professional poet, so don't critic my poetry like you would theirs.
3. i wrote this poem in a matter of moments...
4. please only constructive critisism if you do critisize

My love for you

My love for you is like ocean waves...
Strong and everlasting
My love for you is like the sky
Immence and beautiful
My love for you is like no other
Passionate and true
If i die, i will wait in heaven for you,
because even then you are,
me love. =)
 
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