DIII Coach told me: Don't write an essay solely on the sport to get in..Can I use...

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...this sort of essay? My common app essay doesn't describe the usual winning a soccer game or why I love soccer so much, instead it describes one moment in soccer, like making one touch, the feelings I feel (relief, excitement, etc) and what motivates me, how success is something to constantly strive for, not something you attain once and you're done. I talk about it in great depth and then I relate what motivates me in soccer to what pushes me to work hard in school for a couple sentences..

Do you think this is too much soccer? I feel like its using soccer to show what drives me as a person to reach my goals and stuff, and pursue academics further.
 
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